Sunday, January 1

The Rough Draft

its a raw and angsty song...
Nice for those pple who play in bands to pick it up
audience can singalong!

note:
I'm not sure why "you're leaving me in lieu of this song"...
maybe the words are wrong...
hell, it rhymes anyway


Like a Saturday night
I'll be gone
Like a Saturday night
I'll be gone before you knew that I was there

So you wrote it down
I'm supposed to care
Even though its never there
Sorry if I'm not prepared
Is it hard to see the things you substitute for me and all my thoughts of you
Its eating me alive to leave you

Maybe its childish, and maybe its wrong
But so is the blank stare in lieu of this song
Maybe its childish, and maybe its wrong
Don’t wanna be, don’t wanna be wrong
You're leaving me, you're leaving me in lieu of this song
Don’t wanna be, don’t wanna be wrong
You're leaving, you're leaving me in lieu of this song

Breathing in you're skin tonight
Quiet is my loudest cry
Wouldn’t want to wake the eyes that make me melt inside
And if its healthier to leave you be
May your sickness come and set me free
Kill me while I still believe that you were meant for me

Writing my own words, my own little stage
My own epic drama, my own scripted page
Send you the rough draft
I'll seal it with tears
Maybe you'll read it and I'll reappear

From the start it was shaky and the characters rash
A nice setting heading for heartache where emotions come last
All I have deep inside to overcome this desire are friendly intentions and fair-weathered smiles

And I don’t wanna be, don’t wanna be wrong
You're leaving me, you're leaving me in lieu of this song
Don’t wanna be, don’t wanna be wrong
You're leaving me, you're leaving me in lieu of this loo of this song

Like a Saturday night
I'll be gone
Like a Saturday night
I'll be gone before you knew that I was there


*recommended by Marcus


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